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Play games like Halfway house, Esteria, My New Memories, Price of Power or Eternum and you will see what good English really is.
For Dark Magic the first half is okay but after that the text quality becomes more bad with every scene. Anyone can objectively sees that.

And no, as you can see it's not my second visual novel, I've done enough, independent ones like dark magic and more professional ones like those you can find on Mangagamer.

But hey, if you enjoy that level of English and it doesn't break your immersion good for you. Personally I prefer to play better quality games, that's all.

No worries, we all get more busy at some times, and you work on 2 games aside from your daily life (okay after two months I would have started to worry ^^).
Thanks for the answer, I just bought the game here on itch in the end, prefer to avoid Steam if possible (DRM and all that). Keep up the good work ! :)

The game is pretty okay and the story quite good (even if it's too slow for me), but PLEASE make an effort on the English !!! There are so many typos and even grammatical errors it's painful to read sometimes >_< (I'm not a native speaker but the errors are not even high-school level).

I personally prefer slower updates but with quality, this bad English nearly makes me want to drop the game. Too bad because otherwise the job is pretty good overall.

EDIT : went to the end but I drop the game, the text is really shitty quality now, Google trad do a better job.

@Killer7 Are the itch.io and the steam versions updated at the same time or is there some delay for the steam version ? I want to buy the game to support your game but I would like to be sure beforehand.

Did you had any difficulties to update the game on Steam ? I know some developers have technical issues with that because the platform isn't always stable.

Thanks in advance for your answer :)